COMPOSING THE ESSAY
You want to focus on being creative and coming up with a plan for your writing so that you do not just ramble. Whenever possible, start your essay with a catch – something that will engage the readers and compel them to continue reading. As you are writing, try to keep in mind that this is a formal essay so you need to make sure that you are using proper grammar, punctuation and varying your sentence structure.
You want to focus on being creative and coming up with a plan for your writing so that you do not just ramble. Whenever possible, start your essay with a catch – something that will engage the readers and compel them to continue reading. As you are writing, try to keep in mind that this is a formal essay so you need to make sure that you are using proper grammar, punctuation and varying your sentence structure.
Be sure to use your voice and stick to the word count. (Hint: I know it doesn't seem like it, but I promise, it is always easier to cut words than to try to figure out how to squeeze more detail in later, so answer the question fully first before worrying too much about word count, but plan ahead enough so that you are at least in the ball park of your word limits... you want to cut 50-100 words out not try to cut 2,000 words.) One tip is to use your word count to provide details and depth.
As I mentioned at senior night, there are a few key points to keep in mind as you are writing:
When they give you a prompt or question – be sure that your essay is answering what they are asking! These are smart people – they know when you are just taking a different essay and trying to make it fit for their question. Put in the time to write an essay that answers the question they are asking. Also, be sure that you respond to all parts of the prompt and fulfilling exactly what the college is asking you to do (list, define, explain, compare/ contrast, evaluate, etc.) Yes, you will be telling your story, but that is only part of the process - you have to also reflect back on how that story relates to you and your life in whatever way they are asking.
Show me - Don't just tell me.
Great, so you told me that you are organized and honest… good qualities for their future college students, but are you demonstrating that to them with your essay? Show them what you mean with vivid examples – that will usually be specific, concrete stories to illustrate your point. It can be helpful to describe the scene or the person with sharp nouns and active verbs or by using details that will invoke the senses. How did it look? feel? smell? sound? Don’t just say that "Uncle John was odd." Show us his dog who smashed through closed windows and his unique decorating style of mixing plaid and polka dots.
The whole point of these essays is so that the college admissions officers will learn something new about you. (And trust me, they are learning something about you – even if that lesson is you didn’t appear to care enough about getting into school to pay attention to details like spelling.) So, step back and look at your essay again – did they learn something about you that they wouldn’t have known prior to reading your essay?
One of the biggest challenges as you write your essay is controlling the tone. You want to come across as confident but not boastful, self-assured but not aggressive, accomplished but not perfect. Try to avoid claiming that everything you've ever done has been unbelievably great. Don't be afraid to admit that you are human. Colleges want real, interesting people. Because it's so hard to control the tone of an essay about yourself, you will want to ask several people – teachers, friends, your parents, and even me – to read and respond to your essay. Get a variety of reactions, and then decide how you want to revise the essay. Remember, when getting help with essay revisions it is important to go into it with the thought that you want to get revisions so it can be the best possible essay (instead of going in hoping the editors will just say – good enough.) And yes, that also means you can’t procrastinate and put it off writing your essay until the last possible second. And I hope this goes without saying, but don’t lie. Do not make up stories that are not true or genuine. You are the best you there is and this essay is about you so show yourself off and just be careful on tone.
Every year I have at least 1 student ask me if the colleges read the essays and I can assure you that the answer is YES – they really do read the essays! Please don’t think you can just throw something down on paper and have it be “good enough.” These are formal essays for an application to a college that will be the launching ground for the rest of your life. I know that it sounds intimidating, but relax and start writing – and editing – and then do some more writing and editing…
REVISING THE ESSAY
Once you have written your essay, you want to give plenty of time to edit! I understand that this is (drastically) different than most of the essays you have written in high school, but it is worth writing a draft, walking away from it for a few days and then coming back to read it again to take a fresh look. Many students are stunned at how the essay that they initially thought was great doesn't meet their own expectations when they re-read it with fresh eyes. It can help to read your essay out loud and see if it feels natural and sounds like you. Taking the time to edit and go through multiple drafts is a gift you can give yourself to drastically decrease your stress with the entire college application process.
Once you have written your essay, you want to give plenty of time to edit! I understand that this is (drastically) different than most of the essays you have written in high school, but it is worth writing a draft, walking away from it for a few days and then coming back to read it again to take a fresh look. Many students are stunned at how the essay that they initially thought was great doesn't meet their own expectations when they re-read it with fresh eyes. It can help to read your essay out loud and see if it feels natural and sounds like you. Taking the time to edit and go through multiple drafts is a gift you can give yourself to drastically decrease your stress with the entire college application process.
When you begin reading through your essay again ask yourself:
Does it reveal who you are?
Does it represent your best academic ability?
Does it sound like you?
Look at the overall structure of the essay:
Does it make a stunning point at the beginning and then fizzle, or does it steadily build in interest and intensity?
Have you made clear the relationship between your ideas?
Is the essay well organized?
As you begin to get picky, look at your word choice and make sure you are not overusing particular words. Pay careful attention to the verbs - they should give your reader a clear picture of you in action. Although the essay needs to be personal, you shouldn't overuse the pronoun "I."
The essay also needs to read smoothly. If it is a longer essay, as you revise and refine the piece, be sure that it has an attractive introduction, carefully crafted body paragraphs, and a confident conclusion. Look for clear transitions between paragraphs, and try to vary sentence length and structure.
Please rest assured that I am here to help you with your essays. I will NOT write it for you, but if you are struggling to come up with topics or want help editing, don't hesitate to stop by and see me. Also, the English teachers and Ms. Elliott are awesome resources for editing help too. Good luck and happy writing!
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